We all make mistakes, and I don't claim to use perfect grammar myself, but come on. Whoever wrote this needs to have someone read over her work.
This is an event listing for Wednesdays on the Waterfront, a weekly wine-tasting cruise at Dravo Plazo.
*Reservations are strongly recommended to insure a seat.
You're not paying money to Liberty Mutual so that you get a refund should something go wrong. The writer means ensure.
*We will accept all reservation’s first if there is space available we will open to the general waiting public. Here you have a missplaced apostrophe, as well as a run-on sentence.
*The vessel leave Dravo Dock no later than 5min after the schedule time.
This is followed by another run-on sentence.
*In the event of in climate weather we will not operate.
The writer means inclement - a related, but totally different word.
*We will make every attempted to contact people
Seriously, InWilmington? I know you just post press releases as you get them, but sometimes you should do a little bit of editing before these get typed in, no?
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